Brandon Felczer

CapnBranFlakes

Re: Only a Mother Could Love Pageant Date/Time Change!

March 29 2010
First post updated with April's events. :)

Re:Help Topic! If you have a forum error, post here!

March 29 2010
I've tried fixing this issue several times and I just can't figure it out. It's a bit beyond my skills. My only suggestion is to try Firefox, even if just to add friends. I'm gonna be updating some things in the Network section over the next few weeks. It'll hopefully fix this issue for all the browsers that are having the problem.
Erik Kershner

EspressoPeddler

Re:Help Topic! If you have a forum error, post here!

March 29 2010
I had the add friends bug happen to me. If you are using IE, make sure you dont have compatibility view checked. (by the address bar) I unchecked that and havent had the problem since.

I hope this helps!

-Erik
Brandon Felczer

CapnBranFlakes

Re:Help Topic! If you have a forum error, post her

March 29 2010
i have things like this happen as well; when I try a different browser it seems to work better.

buShroom

Re:Final Fantasy XIII

March 29 2010
I've been playing the crap outta FFXIII since i came out. Totally took sick days from work in order to play it. Beat it a while ago, but I've been doing after credits play for side missions, trophies, etc.

Also, FFX was and still is the best in the series, though I did like FFXII and VIII. Also, I don't think VII was really all that great.
Zander Hawk

Zander_Hawk

Re:Final Fantasy XIII

March 28 2010
Nice!, I've always had an affinity to FF13 Versus, when I first saw the previews for this game, I became more excited about it that than the regular FF13 as well. Thanks for the vid evanescent, you're such an awesome guardian force. XD
Eric

chemkarate

ST: Pandora "Passing"

March 26 2010
Episode 1.4. "Passing"

Admiral Quinn stood up from his desk as Oren-De entered his office on Earth Stardock. The admiral glanced over to Commander Sulu, who acknowledged the nonverbal command with a nod and quickly ushered two officers he was speaking with out of the room. Oren-De glanced at the departing officers as the doors shut behind them, and it all caused him to wonder what this debriefing was really about. He suppressed his curiosity however, and stood at attention.

"Commander Oren-De reporting, sir. I was informed that you wished to see me."

Quinn nodded. "Yes, Commander. Please, have a seat. Can I get you anything to drink?"

Normally Oren-De would have politely refused, but all that he had had to deal with since rescuing the crew of the New Orleans was beginning to take it's toll on him. "Coffee, sir. Black."

"Excellent. Two coffees, black," said Quinn to his desktop replicator. On the side of the desk, two coffees in white mugs that bore the Starfleet insignia shimmered into being. The admiral passed one toward Oren-De, who accepted it gratefully.

"Thank you, sir," he said simply, and took a drink while he waited for the admiral to begin. While he had only been introduced to what Humans called 'coffee' during his time at the Academy, Oren-De had found it very similar to a Giiyen, a stimulating drink from Enhasa. In addition to being useful when a day was wearing long on him, coffee also provided him with a brief taste of home.

Quinn took a quick sip of his own drink before cutting to the chase. "As you now know, Starfleet JAG has taken custody of Lieutenant Calvin. I expect that his trial will begin quickly. As you also know, Lieutenant Matoya is being called as an expert witness in the case regarding his Borg... program. Until the trial is over, the Pandora is to remain here at Earth Stardock."

Oren-De gave a slight frown. "Acknowledged, sir. However... may I ask as to why the Pandora, along with the Kirk, was required to transport Lieutenant Matoya here?"

"Yes, it does seem wasteful, doesn't it," Quinn noted, taking another sip of his coffee. "We decided that, given your science officer's knowledge of the Borg, Calvin's program, and the lengths the Klingons have demonstrated they're willing to go to acquire both as demonstrated by their attack on the Kinet IV science outpost, it would be best that she and Calvin have an escort. The matter is sufficiently sensitive that Starfleet Intelligence insisted."

Oren-De nodded. He still didn't agree with the decision, but he was appreciative for the justification all the same. The admiral continued.

"As for why you're remaining here until the conclusion of the hearing, the reason is two-fold. Primarily, I don't want to waste even more manpower escorting your Matoya back to the Pandora after you've returned to the Klingon front. However, there is another matter that, given its sensitive nature, I wanted to speak with you about personally."

Admiral Quinn tapped a button his desk. "Crewman Donovan, bring Lieutenant Commander Lok in, please."

Oren-De looked over his shoulder toward the office's door in surprise as a young crewman escorted his first officer and Chief of Engineering, War'en Lok, in. The Trill, who seemed just as surprised as Oren-De, approached and stood at attention next to his captain's seat. Oren-De wondered if this had anything to do with the discussion he had had with War'en recently regarding Oren-De's treatment of the crew.

"I apologize for all the secrecy, but this seemed the most appropriate way to inform both of you of the current situation," Admiral Quinn began as he motioned to the monitor behind him. With another tap on his console, the monitor blinked to life with the dossier image of a Trill. He looked to be in his late middle-age, perhaps a little younger than Quinn. War'en immediately recognized the person on the screen, but he kept silent as the Admiral continued.

"This is Rear Admiral Izen Sadda, of the Starfleet Corps of Engineers. His chief project, on which he has been working since his days at the Academy, has been the adaptation of Borg technology to Starfleet designs. A great deal of his work has been key to the development of Starfleet's personal shield technology, as well as the development of the Federation's transwarp network."

War'en nodded. Oren-De glanced at his first officer before returning his attention back to Quinn, relieved that this apparently had nothing to do with his earlier discussions with War'en.

"These days, in addition to that work , he was also involved in analyzing the Borg technology we recovered from the ships that attacked the Vega colony."

War'en's's face became suspicious as he picked up on Quinn's language. "Excuse me, Admiral. He was working on this?"

The older Trill nodded gravely as he turned to look directly at War'en. "30 hours ago, Rear Admiral Sadda was killed in an accident. A magnetic lift malfunctioned and sped out of control. Sadda happened to be in front of it, and the lift crushed him against a wall. He died of massive internal injuries."

Oren-De was surprised to see War'en become incredibly pale in the face. Indeed, it was a terrible accident, but it seemed odd that simply being told about it would put his first officer at such unease. He looked back at Admiral Quinn in confusion. "Sir, while it is a loss for Starfleet that Rear Admiral Sadda died so suddenly, I don't understand what this has to do with myself and Mr. Lok."

Admiral Quinn was about to speak before War'en cut in.

"Read Admiral Sadda is... was... joined with a symbiont. Now that he's dead, I'm to be the next host."
Edited June 21 2010 by chemkarate
Josh

Exobyte

Re:Pandora/Battlefront Crossover: "Out of the Fire"

March 26 2010
((This marks the end of this episode! Stay tuned for the court-martial process and what Talona may be up to next!))
Josh

Exobyte

Re:Pandora/Battlefront Crossover: "Out of the Fire"

March 26 2010
“Sir, we will be entering the system in less than a minute.” Ensign Lacera announced as he managed the helm. Lt. Calvin entered from the turbolift and stood to the side. “Lieutenant, did you need something?”

“No, Captain, I wanted to observe the arrival at Spacedock.” Edgar explained. “I believe even the former captains regardless of actual rank still hold that privilege.”

“This is true.” Oren-De muttered, slightly annoyed at the inefficiency of an extra lieutenant doing nothing but taking up air on his bridge, especially one like Lieutenant Calvin. “Helm, take us out of warp.”

“Dropping out of warp now sir.” Lacera responded as he followed through his orders. The Pandora slowed to her previous impulse speed and the sight of Saturn and her moons appeared shortly after the transition completed. “Ship has been set to three-quarters impulse speed. We should arrive at Earth in ten minutes.”

“All hands, this is the captain. We will be docking at Earth Spacedock in less than ten minutes. All guests should have their belongings gathered and prepare to disembark.” Oren-De announced. Edgar muttered something under his breath. The comm. had shut off and the captain turned to the Lieutenant. “Did you have something to add, Lieutenant Calvin?”

“Apologies, sir, I was speaking out of line.” Edgar said, trying to dismiss his irritation.

“I didn’t hear it, repeat your comment.” Oren-De glared at him, finally having a point to establish hierarchy to the outspoken and insubordinate character.

“I was saying, sir, that was insulting. To imply that any survivors of a destroyed ship would have belongings is insulting to the thirty seconds that they had to get to the escape pods. The only possessions they would have are most likely their own lives.” Edgar said, expanding his comment and slashing at the assertion with a wicked tongue of truth and perspective. Oren-De held his ground while thinking about his discussions with War’en and Talona. This just seemed to frustrate him further.

“Then, perhaps you would like to say something before we arrive?” The Captain asked, almost hoping the Lieutenant would say no. He was ready for the next ten minutes to blink by and remove the lieutenant from his responsibility.

“If you don’t mind, sir, I would appreciate that.” Oren-De sighed and allowed Edgar to say his piece. “This is Lieutenant Calvin to all officers assigned to the New Orleans: It is my deepest regret that I speak to you this last time as your commanding officer. In thirty days time we have dealt with three of the most dangerous threats to the Federation, and we have survived. Our survival is not without consequence, however. In recollection, we should have never had to deal with these encounters ourselves, but fate did not smile upon us. As you continue your careers in Starfleet, look back on this with sobriety; your fellow crewmen and yourself could not have survived without your actions. Thank you for serving admirably under my command...Calvin out.”

Edgar looked around the bridge, noting he had danced a fancy speech and the bridge crew had taken notice, to some's irritation at the grand-standing while others seemed to sympathize. “Thank you for indulging me, Captain.”

“You’re welcome, Lieutenant.” Oren-De said from his chair, watching as Edgar moved to where Lt. Matoya was sitting. Shrel watched the approach carefully having heard of the abrasive interactions the two consistently had in the past. He leaned forward and almost whispered to her, “Lieutenant, I’m curious, was the information I provided in the interview sufficient for now?”

To say the question threw Maggie for a loop would be an understatement, and it showed on her face. “I...uh, well, I don’t think you can discuss them at this time, but thank you, Lieutenant.”

Edgar nodded and began to step away. He continued to speak quietly, “Understood. If it will help with your assignment, I can make a request to Admiral Giovanni to include you on the cleared shortlist for the remaining information. After such clearance is confirmed I will be more than willing to assist.”

Maggie was completely stunned as an eye almost began to twitch. As much resistance as she had been given before to have such eager cooperation now was practically antagonizing. “T-That would be appreciated. I look forward to hearing the result of the conversation.”

Edgar nodded with a smile. “I’ll be certain to keep you informed. Excuse me.”

As the remaining survivors of the New Orleans disembarked onto the spacedock, Edgar joined the bridge officers at the back of the line with Solek. He was far more jovial at this juncture than he was when he boarded the Pandora but his face still wore the sadness he felt for the lives lost under his command. As he stepped onto the spacedock he noticed two Starfleet uniforms that were clearly defined as affiliated with the JAG office with the unique pips they had. Eddie sighed and turned to his crew.

“Officers. This is where I leave you. Best of luck with your careers; keep in touch.” Edgar said to his senior staff as he approached the JAG officers. Solek looked on with concern as Desmond and Summer shared a disappointment. Turek and Aron-Mu just looked confused. Solek quickly moved the group out of the room to leave Edgar alone. He frowned, “I suspected you guys might be here.”

“Lieutenant Edgar Calvin, you are hereby detained for court-martial under Article 131 Section 12 Amendment 3 of the Starfleet Uniform Code.” The JAG officer announced. Edgar simply shook his head. “Come with us.”
Boorus Yim

RivaSar

Re:Fleet Localization (aka, where are you?)

March 24 2010
I'm not part of Stonewall fleet, but thought this is a fun idea and would add to the map. :laugh:

Baton Rouge, LA for me.

EchoSider

Re:Fleet Localization (aka, where are you?)

March 24 2010
I'm in the Kansas City area. About me: I'm 29, i've been with my husband for 7 years, I play, he doesn't anymore. :\ lol.
Eric

chemkarate

Re:Pandora/Battlefront Crossover: "Out of the Fire"

March 24 2010
Oren-De entered the Medical Bay and found that the level of activity had subsided remarkably since they had rescued the crew of the New Orleans. While it was still very much occupied by a number of patients, the chaos of triage treatment seemed to have at last waned and been replaced by the calm of sleeping patients. Oren-De briefly surveyed the room before stepping into Redwing's office. The medical officer was busy at his terminal, though he looked up when Oren-De entered.

"Captain! What can I do for you?"

"I'd like to speak to Ms. Roberts. Is she awake?"

Redwing frowned at the request. "Yes Captain, but I'm not sure now is the best time for disciplin--"

"Yes, I'm up and about, Captain," came a voice from behind Oren-De. The two men looked back toward the office's entrance to see Talona standing here, looking calm and professional. It was almost unbelievable that this same woman had been subject to an intense emotional outburst on the Bridge just days before. Redwing was clearly surprised to see Talona up and about, and Oren-De acted before Redwing could find his voice again.

"Excellent. Doctor, I'd like to borrow your office for a few moments, so we can speak in private."

Redwing frowned again, but knew he had no room to act. He gave a nod before stepping out, deciding he might as well use the interruption to complete a round of check-ups.

"I'm glad to see you looking well, Ms. Roberts."

Talona nodded. "Thank you, sir." After a moment, she spoke again. "Captain, I apologize for my earlier actions on the Bridge. They were unbecoming of a Starfleet officer, and I am prepared to accept the consequences for my actions."

Oren-De studied Talona before responding. "That will not be necessary, Ms. Roberts. Your situation was... extreme."

Talona looked at Oren-De in surprise. "Sir?"

"Since the Borg attack on the Bridge, I've become aware of the your situation. While I knew that you had recently lost your husband to the Borg, I didn't appreciate the toll it was taking on you. As your captain, I should have been more attentive to your emotional state. With that in mind, I am recommending that you take an extended shore leave once we arrive at Earth, so that you can more sufficiently recover."

Talona remained still as she took in what Oren-De said. To Oren-De's surprise, she looked down at the floor as if disappointed, then looked back up at him in frustration.

"Permission to speak freely, sir."

Oren-De gave her a cautious look. "Granted."

"Sir... I thought you were different."

The captain blinked in surprise. "Excuse me?"

"I thought you were different. Everyone on this crew, they all can't help but feel sorry for me. They treat me like a charity case that has to be coddled and pitied. You... you're different. At least, I thought you were. You still treated me like a Starfleet officer. You gave me duties, and obligations, and respect. You gave me responsibilities that everyone was so quick to relieve me of since I came back on board."

"Ms. Roberts, I must admit I'm confused. I was under the impression that you were in grief."

"Grief, yes. That doesn't mean I'm an invalid!" Talona retorted, her voice raised and full of frustration. It was loud enough that it caught Redwing's attention from the other side of the Medical Bay.

"I lost my husband, and yes, I mourn him. I mourn him every day. However, I'm still perfectly capable of functioning and performing my duties," Talona continued. "Why doesn't anyone here understand that? ... Captain, do you want to know why I was in that 'emotional state'?"

Oren-De just nodded, still too confused by Talona's unexpected reaction to do much else.

"It was because of this crew! Every one of them is just so damned determined to help that they couldn't see I didn't want to be helped. I just wanted to move on and get on with my life, but I couldn't. None of them would let me! None of them... except for you, Captain."

Talona's glare softened and she looked off to the side. "You were the only person in this entire crew who seemed to think I was still capable of being a Starfleet officer and not someone in dire need of therapy. So please... don't change now."

Silence settled between the two of them. In the Medical Bay, Redwing's face had become ashen as he heard Talona's complaints. Like the rest of the crew, he had been just as guilty, if not more so. He looked down at his medical tricorder, though he wasn't reading anything on the display.

"I understand, Ms. Roberts. I take it this means you would like to be resume active duty?"

Talona looked at Oren-De with a smile and nodded. "Yes, sir."

"I am glad to hear that. However, you must promise me that I will not have another incident like what transpired on the Bridge. Regardless of the cause, I expect you as a crewmember to be more mindful of your well-being and to seek out assistance when it is needed, either from the crew, Dr. Redwing... or myself," Oren-De said, his voice softening at his self-reference.

"Understood, sir. It will not happen again."

"Excellent. Then, upon Dr. Redwing's release, you will resume duty upon our departure from Earth. Until then, I suggest that you use the time to adequately recover and prepare."

Talona nodded again. "Thank you, sir."

Oren-De gave her a small nod before turning to leave the Medical Bay. As he passed through towards the exit, he noticed Redwing's preoccupied state. He realized that he probably heard Talona's outburst, but decided it would be best not to interfere. After the doors shut behind the captain, Redwing looked up and saw Talona walking toward him.

"Talona, I'm..."

"Please, Red. Don't say it. I've had enough 'sorries' to last me several lifetimes. You know what I want," said Talona, her face stone serious. Redwing nodded.

"You're released from Medical Bay. Please come see me, however, if you notice yourself becoming depressed again."

Talona simply nodded. She walked toward her bed, collected belongings that Shrel had delivered earlier, and exited the Medical Bay. As she walked down the empty corridor toward the turbolift, she picked a tricorder out of the small pile she carried. It had been difficult, getting what was on there out of the Medical Bay without Red noticing, but the chaos caused by the rescue of the New Orleans crew had helped. She'd overheard Maggie and Red talking about the "Borg cure" program, and while she had lay there mourning her assimilated Michael, she had also been thinking of a way to get to it.

It has been a long time since I had to perform a hack that fast. But, if this works, it will all be worth it. They can demote me, they can court-martial me. Whatever it takes, I'm bringing you back, Michael.
Seb

Vee

Re:Fleet Localization (aka, where are you?)

March 23 2010
Canada, Yellowknife in the Northwest Territories. The official middle of bloody nowhere.
Yezar Gentak

yezar

Re:Fleet Localization (aka, where are you?)

March 23 2010
UK. Northeast England. See I'm not Scottish lol
Brandon Felczer

CapnBranFlakes

Only a Mother Could Love Pageant Date/Time Change!

March 22 2010
Bring your ugliest Captain to the Official "Only a Mother Could Love" Pageant! We will be having LIVE voting at these times. The top winner will have their screenshot taken and a Voting Pannel will decide on 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place.

Watch the "StonewallFleet" chat channel for in-game announcements. Also, please register @ stonewallfleet.com/events

Saturday, Mar. 27th, 2010

EST: 12 PM, 5 PM, and 10 PM

PST: 9 AM, 2 PM, 7 PM

GMT: 4 PM, 9 PM, 2 AM (3/28)
Azrial

azrial

Re:Fan Fiction Competition - March 2010

March 22 2010
Quincytyger wrote:
The rain was noticable as I materialized, but it helped me realize I was alive. I had managed to escape the brig aboard the I.S.S. Razor,

but the phaser burn on my shoulder reminded me the it had been a narrow escape indeed.

Suddenly someone or something slammed into me from the side knocking the wind out of me and sending me sprawling into the mud against a

wooden walkway. A wagon rumbled by being pulled by two animals resembling horses. If I hadn't been knocked aside, it would not have been

going by, but rather over me. My shoulder screamed in agony as I tried to push myself up out of the mud, and blackness threatened to

consume me. Shaking my head to clear the fog from my brain I felt two hands gently helping me over onto my back. I noticed a small crowd of

people gathering around me and a strange looking alien kneeling beside me looking at me with silver reflective eyes, set into a redish

tinged face. He, at least I assumed it was a he by the deep voice and somewhat masculin features, was talking to me in a language I didn't

understand. he looked at the wound on my shoulder. I couldn't understand a word of what he was saying, but his firm hands urged me to lie

still and he motioned for another to help him. Letting my head lay back in the mud with the rain gently falling on my face, I closed my

eyes.

I must have lost conciousness, because the next thing I was aware of was laying on a soft blanket in a room lite by a simple flame bearing

lantern. Quickly taking inventory of my surrounding told me that the inhabitants of this planet were a simple folk, and definatly not as

advanced as the federation. A small fire burned in an alcove on one side of the room, and a metal pot hung over it by a hook. My shirt and

jacket had been removed and my wound had been dressed and was covered by a strange smelling moss. Touching it experimentally I noticed the

pain was gone. Whatever this stuff was, seemed to be working well. from a doorway across the room my savior enetered. He was about 6 foot

tall and lean, dressed in simple overalls and a plain shirt. His head was roughly huminoid, but with pointed ears, a ridged brow and nose,

and a redish pink tinge to his skin. His eyes were no where near human. One solid silvery color with no pupils.

"Forgive me Captain, I was not aware that you were awake"

I looked up and smiled, "Just woke up actually...Wait, you speak english?", surprise clearly shown on my face.

He let out what sounded like a small laugh and said, "I do now. Please forgive me. When you lost conciousness I needed to know that our

treatments would not injure you further, so I entered your mind. Thus I learned your language and all about you. This is never done amongst

my people without permission, but given the circumstances, I was left with little choice"

Blushing slightly I asked, "So you now everything about me?"

"Yes. You are Marshal Palen, Bajoran, but born on Earth in Illinois. You enetered starfleet at 20 years of age. Your ship is the U.S.S.

Imbrium. Your mate, the vulcan/human hybrid Bryan disappeared when the Klingons attacked..."

"Stop!" A flash of anger had mad the comment come out more harshly than I had intended. Bryan had died during a klingon raid almost 15

years ago, but the pain was still there. And although he hadn't meant to be insulting, calling Bryan a "hybrid" had put me on the defensive

immediately.

"Forgive me Marshal, I had forgotten that you humans process your emotions differntly than we do. Do not be alarmed as I am the only one

who touched your mind, and your secrets are safe with me." A small smile creased his lips. "Now you must be hungry. You have been sleeping

for 3 days.

A loud growl from my stomach told me he was right. He helped me off the pallet that i was on and steadied me me when the blood rushed to my

head and my legs threatened to dump me back onto the floor. We enetered a small simple room with a wood burning stove and a small table

with two bowls set at each of the chairs. After setting me in one of the chairs, he turned and filled my bowl with a spicy smelling stew.

Taking a small spoon, I tasted it, and was surprised that it tasted like clam chowder. One of my favorite dishes. I began to eat quickly as

hunger overode my thoughts of everything else. Halfway through my bowl my host sat opposite me and set a small piece of bread beside my

bowl. Realizing I was making a pig of myself, I swallowed and appologized.

He laughed, sounding almost like a turkey gobble and said, "No appologies Marshal, eat and be well." With that he began shoveling the stew

into his mouth almost as rapidly as I had done. Smiling I tucked back into my meal. And three bowls later we were both sitting back and

enjoying a companionable silence.

The light outside the window had began to fade and my mind wandered to the events of the past few days. It was hard to remember what

exactly had happened, and the events that lead me to be marooned on this primative planet.

"You say you know everything about me, but I am having trouble rememberng the last few days. Would you mind gong over some things with me,

so I can try and get it straight in my head."

My host looked at me with those strange eyes for a few moments then said, "I think I can do better than that. With your permission, I can

join with you again, and relay the memories that I have to you directly. This will relay days of memeories in but a few moments."

I was skeptical about letting this guy back into my head again, but after thinking about it for a minute realized, he had already been

inside my mind. He knew everything about me, including things that I had never told anyone. I looked at my host and nodded. "Alright, let's

try that." I knew a telepathic link would not only be faster, but clearer than trying to describe was each other was thinking.

"Very well, shall we find a more comfortable place. I must warn you that the sharing is rather," he paused for a moment searching for the

correct word, "intimate"

Thinking he meant "intimate" as our minds would be joined like a vulcan mind meld, something I had experience with Bryan a few times, I was

not too worried. We walked into another small room where he pushed two chairs to face each other closely, and helped me into one of them,

sitting opposite me. I was about to ask if there was anything I needed to do when he placed his hand on the side of my head and pulled me

forward. pressing his lips to mine. As soon as our lips touched a rush of mental imagages flashed through my head. Many of the memories

were not mine. Later I would realized that I was seeing all of his, and only then did I realize, I had never asked my saviors name. Tiam

The images slowed and I saw myself sitting in my ready room on board the Imbrium, packing my bag for a bit of shore leave on Risa. A friend

was meeting me planetside for some doctor ordered rest. My new ships doctor has nearly come unglued when he had seen how long I had been

aboard ship with no time planetside save the occassional away mission. With the war going on, and starfleet being short on ships, there had

been litle time to think about R&R. When we had stopped to change out personnel, or give the crew some time off, there were systems to

repair and modifications to make and test. Being an engineer had been in my blood, and I was always working on something while my chief

engineer was on break. Trying to convince the Doc that to me that was a vacation was futile, so under threat of being relieved of duty, I

agreed to a week on Risa.

The transporter hummed and light filled my vision as I felt myself dematerialize. When the light faded i stood face to face with 4 red

shirted security personnel with phaseres pointed at me. Their com badges told me that these were not starfleet. The mirror universe crew

had somehow highjacked my transported beam and now had me prisoner. I was escorted out of the transporter room and into an interrogation

cell, where their commander had asked me several questions about earth defense protocols, and security decrytion keys. I refused to answer,

and this seemed to make the captain happy. "I so love a challenge. A mind meld will give me all the information I need, and the more you

struggle against me, the more I will enjoy shredding your defenses and tearing through your memories like a phaser cutting through

duranium."

The guards leveled their phasers at me and the force field lowered...when the vulcan captain reached for my gface, I sprang into action. My

hand snapped into his nose breaking it and driving he bone fragments into his brain, he staggered for a moment, then began to slump

forward. I shoved hard and threw him into one of the guards turning to kick out into face of the other. when he fell i continued my turn to

face the first guard and reached for his phaser. We struggled back and forth, and one of us inadvertantly changed the weapon's setting from

heavy stun to a narrow cutting beam. The phaser fired, burning my shoulder and then continue to lance across the face and eyes of the

guard. He screamed as his eyes burned, and loosened his grip. I pulled the weapon free, quickly adjusted the settings and fired point blank

into his abdomin knocking him out cold. Taking one of the guards uniforms i left the brig and hurried toward the transporter room. Although

there were slight differences, the ship design was that of a Miranda class light cruiser, like my first command. As soon as I entered the

room red lights began flashing and the klaxon sounded. My escape had been discovered, and it would only be moments before they shut down

the transporters. I quickly keyed the panel to lock out external controls and began programing the unit with an equation I remembered from

my transpoter theory class, something I continued to study after i left Starfleet Academy. Captain Scotts transwarp beaming equation. I

tied in the long range sensors and entered a subroutine to erase my destination after the beaming sequence had completed. I set the timer

and was about to step onto the pad when another red shirt entered through the doorway. My surprise must have told him I didn't belong, and

to his credit he assesed the situation quickly and rather than try to draw his weapon before I fired, punched out at scored a hit directly

onto my shoulder. I screamed in pain and he kicked the phaser from my hand, grabbed my wrist and flipped me onto the transport pad. Rolling

as best I could, I barely regained my feet when the beaming sequence energized, sending me to god only knew where.

His lips left mine, and only then did I realize that I had opened my mouth and was actually kissing him. I hadn't kissed another man since

Bryan had disappeared. Or anyone for that matter. Maybe it was my way of holding on to the hope that he was alive somewhere. Waiting for me

to find him.

Something came to mind then. "You have a subspace transmitter here."

"Yes. Your ships is enroute and will arrive tomorrow. We contacted them when you arrived, and I was able to gain the knowledge form your

memories. There was a minor incident which had to be dealt with before they could divert to our location, but there is no need for concern.

Although we choose a simple life, we are not primative captain. My species was traveling the stars well before the humans were."

Now was my turn to laugh. Look like my luck was changing after all.


Not a writer, but figured I would give it a shot. Would love to here some honest feedback, so if you don't like it, feel free to tell me why, and maybe I can improve. Don't be afraid to be blunt, I don't bruise easily :P


Overall a very good job. The pacing was good and steady so it kept my interest. Though very short, there was a fair amount of character development. I would be interested to read more about Capt. Marshal & Tiam. The only negative part for me was purely visual as the breaks in the lines of the post were distracting. Good job.
Joshua (Zepari)

Zepari

Re:Fan Fiction Competition - March 2010

March 22 2010
Thankyou All for your amazing stories. The competition is now closed.

Judging will take place this week and the winning story will be featured in this months edition of The Stonewall Times.

As all the stories are so equally brilliant, I am excusing myself from the judging panel, and will instead select 5 fleet members at random who do not appear on any of your friends lists to decide the winner.

Of course anyone is welcome to provide constructive feedback or comment on the excellent entries.

Note: This thread will not be archived after a winner is chosen ensuring that everyone will have a chance to read your stories for a long time to come. I hope you all decide to continue posting your stories in the Holodeck forum for the enjoyment of the entire fleet!
Edited March 22 2010 by Zepari
David Horsley

DavidKenneth

Re:Fleet Localization (aka, where are you?)

March 21 2010
Richmond, Kentucky

GO UK!
Chris Elliott

Spelljammer

Re:Fleet Localization (aka, where are you?)

March 21 2010
Lexington, KY here. Dropped a blue marker right next to Kressh's one...too bad you can't zoom into our house. On second thought, that could be a bad idea :evil: lol
Bernie Burger

STXBernprint

Re:Proposed NAP with Stonewall and Star Trek Xtreme

March 21 2010
Thank you for working so hard on this NAP agreement from all the admirality and high command. I have gotten the email from Zepari and have added the changes.
Thanks again for the awesome day today and I enjoyed the time so far that I have spent with the Stonewall fleet and hope our 2 fleets can get even more friendlier with some friendly games.
Edited March 21 2010 by STXBernprint