Brad H.

Sturnack

March Fiction Writing Contest

March 02 2011
At the heart of every good Star Trek episode lies an exceptional story. The Stonewall Fleet community is brimming with many talented folk who have the ability to craft amazing adventures set in the Star Trek universe. Especially with the Foundry launching soon on Holodeck, encouraging these writers to generate and share their work is perhaps even more important now than it has ever been. As such, we'd like to give our Fleet's collective talent a public forum in which to share their work with the community at large and potentially walk away with some valuable rewards for doing so.

Kicking off this month, Stonewall Fleet is once again hosting a Star Trek Fiction Writing Contest to do just that. From March 1 through March 22, this thread will be open for entry submission. Simply cut and paste your story into a reply on this thread. This initial post contains all of the official rules as well as an involved breakdown of how submissions will be ranked by our panel of judges. Brandon (Bfelczer), Zepari, Solari, DoogieGood and I have all volunteered our time to review the entries and narrow down a winner.

After all submissions have been received, our judges will be poring over them from March 23-30 and rating them on originality, imagery usage, character development, story flow, spelling, grammar, and punctuation. On March 31, official results will be posted and winners will be announced on the forums. Prizes including a full Aegis set, rare tribbles and more will be awarded for 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place winners and their stories will be featured in an upcoming edition of the Stonewall Times.

We look forward to reading all of your creative entries and cannot wait to award some awesome prizes. The rating system breakdown has been included for your information below. Good luck to everyone! :)

- Brad (@Sturnack)

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Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation (30 Points):

On a point scale of 1-10 EACH, your story will be rated on how well it made use of proper grammar, spelling, and punctuation. Good usage of these elements can greatly enhance the reading experience of your story by preventing roadblocks like run-on sentences.

Originality (10 points):

On a point scale of 1-10, your story will be rated on how original it is. While borrowing elements from the Star Trek universe is in itself derivative, this category rates how well you made use of those elements and created your own story around them.

Imagery Usage (10 points):

On a point scale of 1-10, your story will be rated on how well it was able to conjure up accompanying mental images. For instance, there's a big difference between "The ship approached the nebula" and "The ship slowly glided towards the blossoming cloud of fiery nebular gases." Both technically get the basic idea across but the latter brings shape, color, and movement details to mind and makes for a more enjoyable reading experience.

Character Development (10 points):

On a point scale of 1-10, your story will be rated on how well it established the characters involved and fleshed out their emotions and motivations. Knowing why characters make the choices they do and what feelings are involved creates emotional touchstones that deeply engage the reader.

Story Flow (10 points):

On a point scale of 1-10, your story will be rated on how well it keeps the plot moving forward at all times. Stories that become bogged down with too much exposition or needless detail begin to lose the reader's interest. A well paced story is one that includes all of the elements above while also getting from points A to B to C and so on without extreme delay.

FINAL TALLIES:

With seven categories worth up to 10 points each, your story can earn up to 70 points from each of our judges. Point totals from each judge will be added together to create your final score. This means that your story has the potential of earning 350 points if it ranks a 10 in all categories. Once all point totals have been tallied, the stories that come closest to 350 points will win 1st, 2nd, and 3rd place prizes respectively.

Final point totals will be available to the writer by request once the contest has concluded on March 31st.
Edited March 04 2011 by Sturnack
Jay Eudy

Six-of-Nine

Re: How the Klingons destroyed the Crystalline Entity

March 02 2011
If we do it on our klingons rather than feds, we'll have less a chance of random folks showing up.
Jay Eudy

Six-of-Nine

Re: How the Klingons destroyed the Crystalline Entity

March 02 2011
Basically, we'll need as many escorts as we can (or if we do it on klinks too raptors and birds of prey) All set up with dual heavy cannons in the front and turrets in the rear.

According to STO wiki, we'll want to use disruptor weapons, thought other weapon types should be fine. Also, scramble sensors would be a good skill.
Lance

colivia

Re: How the Klingons destroyed the Crystalline Entity

March 02 2011
Count me in too.
Brandon Felczer

CapnBranFlakes

Re: Star Trek: The Journey

March 01 2011
:tng:


Episode 200 - The Next Generation - "Qpid" - 04/22/1991



Q returns to test Picard's love for an old flame.


Enjoy!

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Whoot whoot! 200 episodes! CRAZY!
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Kidd Kasper

kiddkasper

Re: How the Klingons destroyed the Crystalline Entity

March 01 2011
"Cannons of Doom"

I'd be game sometime.
Jay Eudy

Six-of-Nine

How the Klingons destroyed the Crystalline Entity

March 01 2011
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Perhaps we could duplicate this. They claim to have done it in five minutes.
Eric

chemkarate

Re: "Born This Way" is the new gay anthem?

March 01 2011
After watching the video again, I realized something really cool about the beginning. That constellation she refers to as the Government-Owned Alien Territory, or GOAT, that looks like a goat, also looks like a uterus. It just adds to the whole birth imagery. A friend of mine also told me that goats' heads are symbols of evil.

There's a lot more to this video than meets the eye, which is one reason I love the stuff she does. There's layers in the stuff Gaga does which make for far more intelligent and interesting stuff than other pop stars.
Philip

DCollins

Re: V

March 01 2011
Revisiting this post.. Ok.. I have to admit have the original Diana back in the show has been nice.. She is one sneaky lil lady.. and her play of mom v daughter v granddaughter is just so delicious... And yes it is a guilty pleasure.. Still campy as hell.. and still bad acting and bad plots but, it is getting better and better.. Let us hope it rises to the occasion before it is pulled like all the series that do not pull in quick bucks..

Philip

Unknown Person

Re: "Born This Way" is the new gay anthem?

March 01 2011
Umm ok... that was creepy beyond all reason. I actually like it reminds me of a creation myth, or an epic poem. The birth has a 'Gaia' feel to it.
Edited March 01 2011 by Unknown Person
Jarrod Brenden

captainbrenden

Re: "Born This Way" is the new gay anthem?

March 01 2011
i don't love Lady Gaga like I love Madonna (but then I am a child of the 80's), but this video is both trippy and catchy at the same time. I approve! lol
Seannewboy

Seannewboy

Re: Star Trekian Birthday's-Master List

March 01 2011
1 Honorary.
Leon Keogh Hendricken

MoonBeamSpectrum

Re: "Born This Way" is the new gay anthem?

March 01 2011
The Video is different, but hey, if Madonna can get away with the video for 'Like a prayer' then Lady Gaga can get away with this! I like her, not because of her music, but because she is not scared :evil: of doin something out of this world!

And in the video if you notice the part where she is just about to start doin her dance part in the video she looks like Cher!! Just a bit!
Edited March 01 2011 by MoonBeamSpectrum
Eric

chemkarate

Re: "Born This Way" is the new gay anthem?

February 28 2011
I'm not entirely sure what the hell I just saw in that video, but I know that I thought it was fucking AWESOME! I really hope this means the videos from the album will be in this vein of b-budget 80's sci-fi whackiness.

Also, I can't figure out if this video is NSFW. On the one hand, she's giving birth in the video, but on the other hand it's so fucking abstract that it's not really obvious.
Edited February 28 2011 by chemkarate
Grayson

renegadejtx

Re: "Born This Way" is the new gay anthem?

February 28 2011
Yikes.=/=
Dave

Altimus

Re: V

February 28 2011
Quote by Weatherwax
Maybe I keep watching in the vain hope that someone, at some point, will slap the sh!t out of Tyler. For. Being. So. Damn. Stupid.


Hahaha!

I have to say that I'm a big fan of the new series. I vaguely remember bits from the original series because my mum used to watch it, but at the time I think it scared me!

So far I've enjoyed the episodes that many people seemed to think were less good. For example, I thought 'Laid Bare' was very good. I loved how cruel the humans were to Malik, and how they became just as nasty as the V's for a brief period. I liked Malik's final scene.

I enjoy how much of it is subtle, although there is a limit to my patience in waiting for exciting things to happen. I guess storylines become limited once aliens invade though. Battlestar really went wild though, so they could actually do the full-on invasion and it might even work!

I hope they don't cancel this. I'm starting to get bored of picking up a new series because they've cancelled something because it wasn't making the company a quick buck.
Brandon Felczer

CapnBranFlakes

Re: Upcoming Events!

February 28 2011
Updated with the events for March :) Remember to subscribe to this thread to keep up-to-date with the events
Brandon Felczer

CapnBranFlakes

Re: Star Trek: The Journey

February 28 2011
:tng:


Episode 199 - The Next Generation - "The Nth Degree" - 04/01/1991



After an encounter with an alien probe Barclay experiences great leaps in confidence and intelligence.


Enjoy!
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Kevin Keeler

captainjtkirk

Re: HELP! Need your technical expertise re: new comp!

February 28 2011
Nvidia cards have there issues to micro stutering on the 400 / 500 series all top end cards can be affected so it matters not which way you go
Nivida = shadow issues ati = dynamic lighting :D

edit
400 + series - issue
5000 +series -issue
Edited February 28 2011 by captainjtkirk